analysingthementalproblem
ofcollegestudents
background : with the development of society ,today we may find that some college students may kill themselves ,some may abuse cats and dogs ,some even flaunt wealth through the internet ,what is more ,one student may kill another student which she refuses to him .why thosehappening ? according to one survey : many college students have mental problems , and this kind of phenomenon is increasing , so for the above phenomenon ,we can make a conclude that there issomething wrong with their mental health . reasons: we may areinterested in this phenomenon ,what thing lead their mental health to be wrong , for this ,i make a survey among my classmates and friends , asking them some questions , for example , “at home ,work ,or school ,i find my mind wandering form tasks that are uninteresting or difficult ; especially in groups ,i find it hardtostayfocusedon what is being said in conversations ; my relationships withpeople are made difficult by tendency to talk first and think later ;when i do poorly on an exam or paper ,my self-esteem suffers, andso on .”form their
answers ,we can get the results that what lead their mental health to be wrong. first , some students can not adapt to the college life ,those student never leavetheir hometown before ,so most of them can not adapt to college life without their family. second ,some students can not adapt to college learning , in high school ,our teachers guide us learning ,but in college ,it is all rely on self-consciousness ,some can not adapt ,so their studying is bad that they are lose confidence about learning .third ,some students can not adapt to interpersonal communication , in college ,most students come form different places , their life-st(在好范 文 网搜索更多的文章WWW.HaOWoRD.Com)yle may different ,so most of us can not communicate easily. forth ,some students can not deal with love in right way ,if they are struck , they may do some bad thing for themselves or lover. fifth , employment pressure ,nowadays ,there are more and more college students ,in other words ,there are more and more students competefor one position , most of us feel anxiety and inferiority ,so that they may have mental problem.
solutions :college students is the future of our
country ,as a college student ,we must have a good
state of mind whatever we meet and we should have confidence for our life and even every thing. for school ,it should establish the psychological
consultation center ,so we have chances to talk with the teacher when we realize that there is something wrong with our mental health .for our parent ,they should care more about their children , rather not that they have grown up ,do not need more care than before .
第二篇：英文调查报告
广告的目标
1. our main goal is to establish brand awareness among our target audience.
2. our main purpose is to establish brand awareness among our target audience.
3. the main objective is to establish brand awareness among our target audience.
本段的关键在于清楚地表明公司的目标，同时下文即可循着这个主题发展，英文调查报告。"main goal", "main purpose", "main objective",都是指‘主要的目标'。
调查的数据
1. according to my figures, of the working women we polled, 50% said they read at least one of the top-five selling women's magazines in taiwan.
2. the numbers we have show that of the working women we polled, 50% said they read at least one of the top-five selling women's magazines in taiwan.
3. as the facts prove, of the working women who responded to our poll, 50% read one of taiwan's top-five selling women's magazines.
说明调查的结果，并作为下文结论的根据。关键词为"figures"、"numbers"和"facts"等，调查报告《英文调查报告》。
依调查判断
1. if you'll take a look at this chart, the best media mix, then, would be a combination of tv and magazine ads.
2. by looking at the chart you can see that the best media mix would be a combination of tv and magazine ads.
3. as you can tell by the chart, the best media mix would be a combination of tv and magazine ads.
根据调查结果提出方案时，通常会以图表作解释。请与会者看图表时可使用"if"句型，但它不是假设语气，而是一种客气的说法。
下结论
1. to conclude, even though our target audience is clearly defined, introducing a new product is always a gamble.
2. in summary, even though we have defined our target audience, introducing a new product is always a gamble.
3. i've shown you how to reach our target audience, yet i also think introducing a new product is always a gamble.
在最后一段可略述个人对此活动的观感，并简单扼要的下结论。"to conclude"，"in summary"或"i think"都是做结论的实用词汇。